poem; "WINTER"

winter

 

I smell winter on his skin,

paper-thin.

My skin smells like summer heat

burnt but sweet.

 

He melts like ice cream in my arms,

unarmed.

Just shiny drops of winter

unharmed.

 

-And all i want is this,

his airy breath and ice cream kiss.

 

the tiny little drummer

inhabiting my heart.

warm-blooded boys of summer

he could never tell apart

bored by the ever trusted cycle of sun and rain,

-but no snow-flake is ever the same.

12 kommentarer

Tiffany

Aug 30, 2010 kl.1:32 AM

Beautiful!

Mathilde Nicoline

Aug 30, 2010 kl.10:27 AM

<3

Dyveke

Aug 30, 2010 kl.10:35 AM

Veldig, veldig fint.

Stine

Aug 30, 2010 kl.11:00 AM

Utrolig bra^^

Julia

Aug 30, 2010 kl.11:49 AM

Awww Maria this is beautiful... =)

Cynthia Janes

Aug 30, 2010 kl.12:59 PM

wow Maria wow! :)

Cinja

Aug 30, 2010 kl.4:15 PM

oh this is beautiful!

Isabel

Sep 2, 2010 kl.2:13 PM

Maria, your poem is wonderful!

I am so nervous because I will marry tomorrow. Aaaahh! I´m lucky but very excited.

How are you?

Annabel

Sep 2, 2010 kl.2:47 PM

Aboslutely beautiful and very intelligently written. I am so inspired by the poem that I want to write some of my own. If you don't mind I am going to print it out and stick it on my 'poems board' where I put up all my inspirational poems. My board is at work - so when I feel like I hate my job I can look at nice things!

annika

Sep 6, 2010 kl.8:21 AM

you inspire me every single day. your poem is so wonderful! Thank you!

Kristina

Sep 7, 2010 kl.5:40 PM

fint.

apropos paperthin, så er denne musikkvideoen nydeleg: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JLL6KxyNe1U

mariamenamusic

Sep 7, 2010 kl.8:12 PM

Isabel: congrats !!!

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