i wrote a poem, gave it to the world.

"its own song"

i am not one to stand on roof-tops,

belt my heart out.

i get stuck.

my vision gets blurred by all the can-not's,

the understand not's.

lack of luck.

theres plenty of room for all the heartache,

my bad mistakes,

my faults

my memory leaves out all the good stuff,

creates its own bluff,

selective vault

but from the pit of my stomach,

i can hear it moan..

my love for him is jealous.. it wants its own song.

i should write about how he laughs with me

how good he smells when he sleeps.

how he would turn off the tv, just to hear me speak...

even if a good games on..

-i should really write THAT song..

7 kommentarer


Mar 29, 2011 kl.11:45 PM

Please, make it become a song?


Mar 30, 2011 kl.7:50 AM

aaawww...really really nice :-))

Cynthia Janes

Mar 30, 2011 kl.9:20 AM

WOW maria WOW! just WOW! <3


Mar 30, 2011 kl.10:03 AM

Just beauty- and soulful! :-) Love it!


Mar 31, 2011 kl.12:58 PM

you should, i love you're poemes, they are the most honest of al of the lyrices


Apr 1, 2011 kl.3:48 PM

Beautiful......... thank you for sharing

Xx from Holland

Heleen Bos

Apr 3, 2011 kl.12:06 AM

YES make it a song and end it with... so I did!

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