i wrote a poem, gave it to the world.

"it´s own song"


i am not one to stand on roof-tops, 

belt my heart out. 

i get stuck.

my vision gets blurred by all the can-not's, 

the understand not's. 

lack of luck.


there´s plenty of room for all the heartache, 

my bad mistakes, 

my faults

my memory leaves out all the good stuff, 

creates it´s own bluff, 

selective vault


but from the pit of my stomach, 

i can hear it moan..

my love for him is jealous.. it wants it´s own song.


i should write about how he laughs with me

how good he smells when he sleeps.

how he would turn off the tv, just to hear me speak...


even if a good game´s on..  


-i should really write THAT song..

7 kommentarer


Mar 29, 2011 kl.11:45 PM

Please, make it become a song?


Mar 30, 2011 kl.7:50 AM

aaawww...really really nice :-))

Cynthia Janes

Mar 30, 2011 kl.9:20 AM

WOW maria WOW! just WOW! <3


Mar 30, 2011 kl.10:03 AM

Just beauty- and soulful! :-) Love it!


Mar 31, 2011 kl.12:58 PM

you should, i love you're poemes, they are the most honest of al of the lyrices


Apr 1, 2011 kl.3:48 PM

Beautiful......... thank you for sharing

Xx from Holland

Heleen Bos

Apr 3, 2011 kl.12:06 AM

YES make it a song and end it with... so I did!

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